Seriously ! my teacher needs a poem here
she asked me to be creative, but this is so unfair
essays, journals, and now a poem, she wants me to lose my hair
I know myself novels and poems these colors, I should not wear
I was going to protest, but do I dare
so, I have to write or, I will be kicked out of my chair
I tried to grasp ideas, but my brain does not care
after few hours, I asked my head please sir
it answered me and said, I am not there
Brianna enjoy my poem, it is not from the air
please don't tell me, review your poem and repair
I hope you'll like it :)
I hope you'll like it :)
I'm glad to see that you decided to do the assignment even though you are clearly opposed. Though you may think I give you these assignments to "lose your hair," the only reason is to encourage you to write. This is, after all, a writing class. You are not graded, and therefore, there is no "fairness" or "judging" coming into play.
ReplyDeleteNext time you do an assignment, I hope you are aware that it's not to tear you down. Maybe you will also remember to do the same.
I am very happy to see that once you found a subject you were passionate about, you actually did write a very good poem. You should "wear" them more.
:)
ReplyDeleteThank you
In my culture this type of poems presents how do you like to write but you show the opposite to attract the readers (like a hook)& don't worry the next assignment I am going to surprise you.
your work in class is highly appreciated and I am learning from you.
Warmest Regards,
Hehehe! I like your poetry. I couldn't helping keeping reading your poem. I was able to see the affection for writing among your complaining for your poem. Your poem made me chuckle. I hope to see your next journal and also hope your hair is still remained xD
ReplyDeleteI promise I am going to keep my hair for next journal :P
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Dabin,
hahaha
ReplyDeletei like it, u aren't the only one my friend
good job!
lol
ReplyDeletethats very risky